Aha, that one looks a lot better indeed. I’ll try later today, thanks.
Can I suggest Discourse make an install overview page? Something that explains the different ways of installing. Hopefully that will actually end up in google if you search for Discourse install 
Currently I find:
- How To Install Discourse on Ubuntu 16.04 | DigitalOcean
That one is only for cloud, on DO - discourse/docs/INSTALL.md at main · discourse/discourse · GitHub
That one is too short and links to the next link - discourse/docs/INSTALL-cloud.md at main · discourse/discourse · GitHub
That one is for cloud, on DO