Overall I think we are making lots of progress here, the right hand side is working, but I am finding the contrast on read stuff very hard to read and see of grey is a bit sad.
Compare to this interactive artifact (clickable, try it out)
I kind of like the last option the most, cause it is clear and uncluttered, but the first 2 feel fine as well.
Thoughts? (also what’s up with Nathan … what an avatar 
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(also the reduced border radius feels a tiny bit better)